The Rank I'm applying for is: Apprentice
My Game Name is: sneby
My Project is called: CottageA
To get to my project: -9304.490 71.43720 -1596.485
A brief description of my project: A small, compact cottage for one, surrounded by pleasant scenery.
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Re: Rank Application
I've taken a look at your build but before rating I'd like to point out a few places that can be improved.
Firstly the trees can be improved to look more natural as they currently feel out of place, I'd suggest asking someone in-game who's good at building natural trees for some tips. I like what you've tried to do with the glass for smoke, however from a distance it also looks quite out of place like the trees, cobwebs tend to get used for smoke as they fit in nicer.
My rating for this build:
Beauty: 4/10
Uniqueness: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
Scale: 3/10
Overall is 16/40 which is only just enough for apprentice
If you plan to do builds like these in the future you should do something on a larger scale as ranks such as Architect will require. Perhaps do a town or village with similar building style, more detail and as mentioned before, natural trees
Firstly the trees can be improved to look more natural as they currently feel out of place, I'd suggest asking someone in-game who's good at building natural trees for some tips. I like what you've tried to do with the glass for smoke, however from a distance it also looks quite out of place like the trees, cobwebs tend to get used for smoke as they fit in nicer.
My rating for this build:
Beauty: 4/10
Uniqueness: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
Scale: 3/10
Overall is 16/40 which is only just enough for apprentice
If you plan to do builds like these in the future you should do something on a larger scale as ranks such as Architect will require. Perhaps do a town or village with similar building style, more detail and as mentioned before, natural trees
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