Ep1c_J3lly's Architect Rank Application (Attempt 3)

[Shoes3296]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect

My Game Name is: Ep1c_J3lly

My Project is called: My House

To get to my project: TP to me if I'm online or to -5000 63 18661

A brief description of my project: In my previous application I had just built my house with a tree farm. I've now added some more decorative builds such as a couple of gardens (and a secret one, accessed via a lever hidden in the pond) and some new buildings.

Three mandatory screenshots:

Outside.png (1.25 MiB) Viewed 1879 times

Overhead View.png (1.43 MiB) Viewed 1879 times

Garden 1a.png (1.17 MiB) Viewed 1879 times

Secret Garden 1.png (748.75 KiB) Viewed 1879 times

Garden 2a.png (1.42 MiB) Viewed 1879 times

Church.png (1.19 MiB) Viewed 1879 times

Graveyard.png (376.31 KiB) Viewed 1879 times

I've also made an album with interior shots and a couple of different angles as well, so please take a look
http://imgur.com/a/0cFUW

Thanks

[Failure]

nicer better and more worthy feels randomized though

[Shoes3296]

Thanks but what do you mean by randomized?

[Failure]

I'm not staff but this seems a little rushed with buildings just splattered everywhere

[Shoes3296]

Ahh okay, I find usually when I build stuff it ends up all lined up and just doesn't look very natural. So with this one I tried to mix it up a little

[wesleyearl123]

Looks good, real freaking good. However there are downsides on this, but I'm sure the pros of the build could make it to architect.
First off, those puny little paths are kind of small, I like to use my pathways in about 3-5 blocks of width.
Second, You might want to put lamps instead of glowstone blocks just sittin' in no where, the scale might raise if you make them big, and be sure to use different heights and not to use 1-3 blocks of height.
Third, try to make handmade trees, looks a lot better C:
Here are the pros: The scale is GREEAT! I love it! The beauty is around decent, and it might come crashing towards CP than Architect. Good luck Ep1c

[Shoes3296]

Thank you! and thanks for the advice as well, I'll start working on some new designs for the things you suggested

[Daloria]

Uniqueness: 7
Beauty: 7
Execution: 9
Scale: 7

Total: 30

Visited this build in game.

I remember seeing this on your first app and it's great to see how much more you've done with the place. The buildings really are lovely. It's nice to see something different.

You've laid out the town well and the gardens are lovely. The hidden one was a brilliant idea! Good job.

[Shoes3296]

Thank you so much Daloria!

[Pri]

Rank applied.