Jeding Architect 2

[jeding]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: Jeding
My Project is called: Vault 250 and Wasteland
To get to my project: Coords are included in the screenshots
A brief description of my project: A nuclear war has happened and people live in vaults
Three mandatory screenshots: http://imgur.com/a/aUi7o

[Failure]

So it's fallout it's basically fallout

[EmberCelica]

That looks fairly good. Best of luck jed!

[jeding]

Thanks Ember! And yes Failure it is based on the Fallout universe.

[Failure]

Cool

[Daloria]

Uniqueness: 7
Beauty: 6
Execution: 8
Scale: 7

Total: 28 - Not enough for architect.

The idea is good and the inside is vastly improved. The little touches and rooms are great.

I like that you've made the wasteland on the outside and it's nice however it still seems very bare. I know it would be somewhat barren but there would be bigger buildings, dead trees, potentially a small settlement outside. Work on adding some more to the area.

Love the idea and work you've done so far. Keep at it.

You can resubmit in 7 days.

[jeding]

Alright I will follow your advice, thanks Dal.