Second Arch Attempt

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Second Arch Attempt

Fri Nov 06, 2015 12:50 am

Yes you read it right, this is not a redstone application, but instead an architect application because i wanted to give building something pretty another shot. Anywho, here is the template and the info corresponding to it.

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: Ember_Animus
My Project is called: A house for 3
To get to my project: X: 930, Y: 32, Z: -13543
A brief description of my project: This house is doesnt really look like a house, but the family that hired me to do it, wanted me to build it with a castle kind of look in mind as well as one story. The last request is for it to be able to house them and at least 4 more people in the case of a party (not over night stay). Lastly they also wanted me to have it contain anything they may need in their line of adventuring, and this was the turn out.
Three mandatory screenshots:
All of them are located in the following album: http://imgur.com/a/ugmEG but here are a few inline images for easier sight
Sidenote - All of the picture descriptions are underneath the corrosponding photo.
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That is just an arial view of the entire build
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There is the living room where-in-which parties can be held as well as a bed. It also has an icebox with the couches and a couple kitchen appliances. Also includes a luxury hottub heated by lava underneath so that it is always warm and no fuel needed.
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This lovely room is a brewery for all your witchery needs. Attached to the left-hand side is a water pipe feeding from the watertank to keep the kiln from overheating and melting the container. In the brewery is a netherrack fueled flame to accelerate the heating of the water, but no worries! If the fire goes out the lava will make sure it stays heated, but it does take a bit longer. This room also contains a portal to the Abyssal plane so that you can gather the majority of your witching materium.
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Lastly in this room is the library. It holds books for the children, so that they can learn anything from ABC's, to the science behind combustion, to the mystic aspects of the Atral plane that feed into the world of minecraft to enable enchanting. This room also allows you to craft or repair anything that you make, so long as you have the materia that the item in question requires, also it may require a certain amount of.. knowledge obtained from the memories of the dead, what we dearly call experience levels.

PS: Ignore the other buildings surrounding the building presented by screenshots. I do credit the pixel-art build near this to rick, and the other buildings are just something i done in my break time from this.
Another note: In the screenshot section, i tried to explain the rooms in a different kind of way, dont let the words or etc confuse you, its almost like a sales-pitch or commentary kind of standpoint i think.
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Re: Second Arch Attempt

Sun Nov 08, 2015 1:01 pm

Uniqueness: 7
Beauty: 5
Execution: 5
Scale: 4

Total = 21 not enough for Architect.

The building shape is different and I like the layout inside. It reminds me of a secret chamber.

The hallways are very empty within the building and the outside is completely bare. The build overall is lacking in size. Add more structures and some landscaping around.

You can resubmit in 7 days. Keep at it! <3
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Re: Second Arch Attempt

Mon Nov 09, 2015 6:58 pm

By the way Ember, that thing I said yesterday about the server shutting down forever was just a joke, I tell that joke every month for the past 5 years lol
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Re: Second Arch Attempt

Mon Nov 09, 2015 10:39 pm

Pri wrote:By the way Ember, that thing I said yesterday about the server shutting down forever was just a joke, I tell that joke every month for the past 5 years lol
I know pri, its just that i had to leave for work pronto so i didnt really have time to respond or anything. Sorry bout the communications lol
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