The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: DaYan_PanShi (Formerly Countrypro77)
My Project is called: "Wooden Houses"
To get to my project: This Project is on CREATIVE. -14939, 62, -2841
A brief description of my project: Two detailed houses, along with an abandoned work shack, all filled with scrumptious detail.
Three mandatory screenshots: https://imgur.com/a/X0q1Y
Although I doubt I will get 30+ Points, my goal will be 20.
Rank Application [ DaYan_PanShi, Engineer ]
- Countrypro71
- Apprentice
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Rank Application [ DaYan_PanShi, Engineer ]
Last edited by Countrypro71 on Sat Sep 23, 2017 4:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
- wesleyearl123
- Architect
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Re: Rank Application [ DaYan_PanShi, Engineer ]
Uhm, I think you might mean Architect instead of Engineer, Engi is for redstone based builds
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- Countrypro71
- Apprentice
- Pri
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Re: Rank Application [ DaYan_PanShi, Engineer ]
I've visited the build in-game and I'm ready to rate it. Before I begin I should mention that due to building it on creative the build will be judged more harshly because you have access to unlimited blocks from the entire Minecraft block library so we expect more creativity and going the extra mile.
I like the build but it does feel disjointed from the landscape. You have not built up the underwater floor to meet the island, it's sitting on a plinth one block thick and it just doesn't look natural. I think you could have done more here and probably got Architect with it had you melded the landscape to fit the build.
So on with the rating:
Beauty: 5/10
Uniqueness: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
Scale: 4/10
Total: 18/40 - This is enough for Apprentice (your current rank) but not enough for Architect I'm afraid.
I like the build but it does feel disjointed from the landscape. You have not built up the underwater floor to meet the island, it's sitting on a plinth one block thick and it just doesn't look natural. I think you could have done more here and probably got Architect with it had you melded the landscape to fit the build.
So on with the rating:
Beauty: 5/10
Uniqueness: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
Scale: 4/10
Total: 18/40 - This is enough for Apprentice (your current rank) but not enough for Architect I'm afraid.
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