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Rank Application

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2018 9:45 am
by sneby
The Rank I'm applying for is: Apprentice
My Game Name is: sneby
My Project is called: CottageA
To get to my project: -9304.490 71.43720 -1596.485
A brief description of my project: A small, compact cottage for one, surrounded by pleasant scenery.
Three mandatory screenshots:

Re: Rank Application

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2018 11:23 am
by mjw8441
I've taken a look at your build but before rating I'd like to point out a few places that can be improved.

Firstly the trees can be improved to look more natural as they currently feel out of place, I'd suggest asking someone in-game who's good at building natural trees for some tips. I like what you've tried to do with the glass for smoke, however from a distance it also looks quite out of place like the trees, cobwebs tend to get used for smoke as they fit in nicer.

My rating for this build:

Beauty: 4/10
Uniqueness: 5/10
Execution: 4/10
Scale: 3/10

Overall is 16/40 which is only just enough for apprentice 😁

If you plan to do builds like these in the future you should do something on a larger scale as ranks such as Architect will require. Perhaps do a town or village with similar building style, more detail and as mentioned before, natural trees 😁