Lixo's Apprentice Application

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Lixo
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Lixo's Apprentice Application

Wed Jan 31, 2018 9:50 pm

The Rank I'm applying for is:
Apprentice

My Game Name is:
maximanturbo

My Project is called:
Lixo's World

To get to my project:
-7616 34 8669

A brief description of my project:
I added some more to it, looking to get at least apprentice or higher and I will add more in the future. There is more so go to the coords, the pictures do not show it all.
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Girvvy
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Re: Lixo's Apprentice Application

Fri Feb 02, 2018 9:31 pm

Total: 12/40, this isn't enough for Apprentice I'm afraid.

Uniqueness: 3, its a small park area and there are quite a few of these around the server.
Scale: 2, this is a build on the creative server, and to say it is it is really quite small and there isn't much to it.
Execution: 3, What you have built is nice, but its still quite an empty build
Beauty: 4, A lot of the build is empty and looks quite bland

What I suggest Maxi is that if you plan on continuing to build on the creative server, you need to increase the scale a lot, as all you have currently is one mound of grass, a path, some trees and a car, with the grass been bone-mealed. I really liked the way the mine looks however it don't think it fits in with the rest of the build and I think you'd be better with some more landscaping details and small building.

I hope to see you continue building on this before you can resubmit it again in at least a week.

- Girvvy
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