Demidox - Build Application: Garden of Dionysus

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Demidox
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Demidox - Build Application: Garden of Dionysus

Tue Nov 07, 2017 8:15 pm

The Rank I'm applying for is: Legendary Crafter

My Game Name is: Demidox

My Project is called: Garden of Dionysus

To get to my project: Flat World: X-544 Y32 Z-5546

Brief* description: Welcome to the Garden of Dionysus; It's my vision of the home of the Greek god of Wine, Fertility, Ritual Madness and Theatre. Bright white stone, towering pillars and massive amounts of ornate decoration plastered with an organised overgrowth of plant life. Massive mountain ranges surround this floating behemoth dedicated to Dionysus.

Made up of many vineyards, both inside and out, these supply the wine drank under the Greek God's name. The floating temple is supplied with endless, pure water pouring from an exploding star frozen in time high above.

Mandatory Screenshots: https://imgur.com/a/Ivlhm
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Pri
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Re: Demidox - Build Application: Garden of Dionysus

Tue Nov 07, 2017 8:36 pm

Hello, I have viewed the build in-game and I am ready to give my rating.

Beauty: 9/10
Uniqueness: 9/10
Scale: 10/10
Execution: 7/10

This gives you a total score of 35/40 which is enough for Master Crafter. Congratulations. I think the build needs a bit more time spent on the details I have included these screenshots which are the reason for the lower execution score:

Balcony not finished:
https://i.imgur.com/jtAUsBW.jpg

Inside house not furnished in any way:
https://i.imgur.com/TiRLBBZ.jpg

Road to nowhere:
https://i.imgur.com/d3fbVZC.jpg

Road to nowhere x2:
https://i.imgur.com/bPGiaCe.jpg

Floaty Trees:
https://i.imgur.com/O1rauSt.jpg

A lot of these issues may seem nitpicky but they are important for a full execution score. You've hit all the big notes, all the big stuff looks great, the overall theme of the build is consistent, it just needs some time and attention to the small things that look like they've been overlooked due to rushing etc

You may submit again next week, I'd recommend going for Epic Crafter , you'd only need 2 more points.
nAugrim29
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Re: Demidox - Build Application: Garden of Dionysus

Sat Nov 11, 2017 6:30 pm

Good job Demidox! I saw this build for myself on the creative server and it is very well made.

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