The Rank App of The Fay Thing 2.0

[Brill]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Anything higher than Apprentice
My Game Name is: Faylien_
My Project is called: The Network
To get to my project: -17084 68 -4066
A brief description of my project: A dark, deep and dank sewer full of all the ruin and rancid of an ancient sewer. Yet there is something odd about this one....
Three mandatory screenshots: I put more for a sort of "story"

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God that stinks!

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What's that in the water.....

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Is that blood?!?!?

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Why is that paper brown......

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Where is the blood going.....

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Why am I smelling alcohol...

[TheLenore]

viewtopic.php?f=36&t=5860 isn't it the same as this one?

[Brill]

ya its the same build i improved it and now im sendin it again after a week

[wannsa]

I've looked at this in game. And it's an interesting idea. I like creepy sewers and I enjoyed finding the chest with named drinks in them. However I don't feel this is ready to be rated again. It's still very close to what you had before. It's also very repetitious once inside the tunnels. I would need to see more unique ideas added to this, either in different rooms, different tunnels of varying size, or even some time of blocked off areas with something inside it. Maybe even a Ruined Town above ground. This just isn't arch worthy to me yet.
I hope you continue working on it or start with a new project for arch.