Monkli's application :)

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Monkli's application :)

Tue Aug 23, 2016 9:14 pm

NOTE: So, I think Architect is the rank above apprentice, lol. I would've applied for apprentice, but well, I bought apprentice not knowing you could apply! :lol: so here's my architect application

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Hopefully this dog will help you think more about my application... (shh)
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Architect Application (By monkli, a.k.a dodgy!)

My game name is " monkli " :)
I'm applying for architect if you didn't read the above ;)
My project is called: antiquis Sinis temple (Old china temple, no name yet) (it's Latin!)
To get to my project: My town spawn won't change (xD), so spawn at my town, which is MonkliTown, (spawn should be the purple beacon) and follow the direction of the heads! Good luck my friend. Turn around when you find a raw piece of clay at the end of my bridge!
Brief description: An ancient Chinese temple with a spruce/oak style, quiet large, built within a day (full day, first day on renmx lol) and it's Monkli's first build on RenMX! :D (hip hooray!)

Here are some screenshots:




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Yeah sorry guys! The third got lost in the seas of my PC. Aye, me hearty!
To make things better, I made a small cinematic clip of the 360 view of the X axis!

[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcTSGMs ... e=youtu.be[/youtube]
Watching that now I realised the bad quality. Sorry guys. At least you captured my Spotify audio. Great! ;D
if the YouTube feature doesn't work, the URL is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcTSGMs ... e=youtu.be :)


Yeah well, ending this application (Mainly because I have to sleep LOL), I hope I will earn architect. Even though I have only played the server for one and a half days and have only built for ONE, I have donated $25 to prove that I love this server so much. Even if I do not get Architect, I will still play happily, since I was going to go for apprentice anyways pfhgt. But (:lol:) I hope I made this application wonderful to read for Pri and the Squad.

Hello, Pri Nye the science guy!

Anyways, see you!

~ Monkli :)

EDIT: Anyone judging this, look below in the comments at the Improvments I made!
Last edited by monkli on Wed Aug 24, 2016 8:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Tue Aug 23, 2016 9:16 pm

noice, very noice I totally rate 69/666 bruh ;)
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Tue Aug 23, 2016 10:46 pm

I thought i would give my opinion on this just because I was flicking threw the forums and saw this rank app. As a previous moderator who marked ranks I have a few things that can push this over into architect because at this moment I would say this is apprentice worthy.

Before reading this you must know I have no influence over what ranking another staff member will give you. Just a extra perspective :) so use this advice if you find it useful.

So The lack of different resources. Wood looks great but try mixing it up with some detail of stone and other materials.
And the big thing is that it isn't attached to the ground in any way. Buildings don't just float. Even if they are from wood. Also adding a few gardens to add colour would help since it's fairly bland because it's just brown. How ever I like this build and with a bit more attention to detail could make this a good architect application. :) good luck
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Tue Aug 23, 2016 10:47 pm

monkli wrote:noice, very noice I totally rate 69/666 bruh ;)

Also did you just comment how great your build was xD
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Tue Aug 23, 2016 11:11 pm

also 69/666 would totally not a score you would want lol
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Wed Aug 24, 2016 6:55 am

blackeyeddog wrote:
monkli wrote:noice, very noice I totally rate 69/666 bruh ;)

Also did you just comment how great your build was xD
....Nooooo....
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Wed Aug 24, 2016 6:55 am

blackeyeddog wrote:I thought i would give my opinion on this just because I was flicking threw the forums and saw this rank app. As a previous moderator who marked ranks I have a few things that can push this over into architect because at this moment I would say this is apprentice worthy.

Before reading this you must know I have no influence over what ranking another staff member will give you. Just a extra perspective :) so use this advice if you find it useful.

So The lack of different resources. Wood looks great but try mixing it up with some detail of stone and other materials.
And the big thing is that it isn't attached to the ground in any way. Buildings don't just float. Even if they are from wood. Also adding a few gardens to add colour would help since it's fairly bland because it's just brown. How ever I like this build and with a bit more attention to detail could make this a good architect application. :) good luck

Yeah lol I didn't really think I could get architect I was going to apply for apprentice but I bought it lol ;-;
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Wed Aug 24, 2016 8:36 am

blackeyeddog wrote:I thought i would give my opinion on this just because I was flicking threw the forums and saw this rank app. As a previous moderator who marked ranks I have a few things that can push this over into architect because at this moment I would say this is apprentice worthy.

Before reading this you must know I have no influence over what ranking another staff member will give you. Just a extra perspective :) so use this advice if you find it useful.

So The lack of different resources. Wood looks great but try mixing it up with some detail of stone and other materials.
And the big thing is that it isn't attached to the ground in any way. Buildings don't just float. Even if they are from wood. Also adding a few gardens to add colour would help since it's fairly bland because it's just brown. How ever I like this build and with a bit more attention to detail could make this a good architect application. :) good luck
This morning I have taken into account your suggestions/advice and I've improved my build :) Here are the new screenshots!

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(Added roof, small Gardens, Pillars holding it up, Leaves on roof for added detail, extra lights underwater, rows of stone brick joining the 2 parts together better)
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Wed Aug 24, 2016 7:50 pm

Been checking all day for a reply :)
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Re: Monkli's application :)

Wed Aug 24, 2016 8:50 pm

A staff member usually will respond as soon as possible, just try and be patient about it.
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