LucoGamer's City Planner application II.

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LucoGamer
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LucoGamer's City Planner application II.

Fri Apr 08, 2016 5:55 pm

The Rank I'm applying for is: City Planner
My Game Name is: LucoGamer
My Project is called: Town o' Winchester
To get to my project: X: 208 Z: 2469 on creative world
A brief description of my project: The project remains almost untouched on the plains biome side, I have added a mine as you can see in the screenshots, but the main part here is the new Ice biome, I began building a snow biome linking it to the plains then it was recommended that I make it as if there is a war between the Ice and Plains, so from there I added in war chambers, soldier production factories, the screenshots have not captured it as well as I hoped so please do stop by and look! If you want to know some lore of the build then look below.
Screenshots: http://imgur.com/a/XeIGq
Screenshots from previous submission: http://imgur.com/a/IOcdC

Lore:
This lore is still in work so please feel free to suggest things.
There once was a man who had a beautiful wife,
Then the snow attacked and she lost her life,
Filled with remorse he grabbed his torch,
He walked up his broke stairs and sat down in his chair,
He thought about how to move on but the thought he could not bear,
so he picked up his rope, put it around his throat and jumped off into the air,
He dangled there, loosing his breathe so he could join his wife in death.
Now the war between snow and plains continues for many years to come,
Now every man, woman and child must pick up a gun.
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Daloria
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Re: LucoGamer's City Planner application II.

Fri Apr 08, 2016 7:11 pm

Uniqueness: 8/10
Execution: 9/10
Beauty: 8/10
Scale: 10/10

Total: 35 - Spot on enough for City Planner

Since your last app you have almost doubled your build in size. Your buildings are varied and keep the steady theme throughout.

The lore behind it is definitely present in the build. You've done a great job Luco.
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Re: LucoGamer's City Planner application II.

Fri Apr 08, 2016 7:40 pm

Looks nice I agree with Daloria. Rank applied :)

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