Rank applying for/: City Planner (hopefully?)
IGN: WesTheChick
Projecto Name: Pelborway (Denvardo sounded really stupid)
To get to my Projecto:X,Y,Z (in order) 10153.545, 63, -7399.570 (or teleport me in-game)
A description: Pelborway is the new name of the city, where Mayor WesTheChick lives. As from last time, the Mayor improved McTidgeys, and has contructed the Statue of the Chicken God/Pride. Pelborway is also the island where you can enjoy your life on there, (i think).
Added, Deleted, Tweaked: (+,-,=)
+Street Lights, =Road, =Barn, +Bakery,Hospital,Bank, -Waterfall, -Tree near pond, =Pond, +Chicken Area, =Landscape, -Dock, +New Dock, =Farm shape, +Shrine, =Daigle's Shrine, Lab, =Well, +Clockwork Tower or something like that, =Tidges, + or = all interiors, =Mine, +Riverway to Ocean, +LOTS OF HEADS. +The roflcopter. , +Another tree, +Flowers/Tulips/Deadbushes/etc., +Arch to North of Pelborway (where barn is), =Fishing Shelter, =Bridge, +Grape and Cherry Farm
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Wes' City Planner App? I
- wesleyearl123
- Architect
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Wes' City Planner App? I
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- Tidges
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- Gray's Library
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- Barn
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- Dal's Hospital, Steph's Bakery, and Wannsa's Bank
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- Blacksmith's Shop
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- Bio's, 'Lab'
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- Freak's Shrine
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- Part of Mine, Statue of Chicken God, McTidgeys
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- Aerial View
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Owner of McTidgeys
- wesleyearl123
- Architect
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
Also, feedback from anyone and scoring would be appreciated 

Owner of McTidgeys
- BioZombieActive
- Artist
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If you don't want a sarcastic answer, don't ask a stupid question.
Immature: A word boring people use to describe fun people.
Next sob story: rip their throat out and shove a turd down the hole.
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
hope you get it!

If you don't want a sarcastic answer, don't ask a stupid question.
Immature: A word boring people use to describe fun people.
Next sob story: rip their throat out and shove a turd down the hole.
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
- GrayTheMudkip
- Artist
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"Everyone want's happiness no one wants pain but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain"
Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
Hope you get this Wes 


"Everyone want's happiness no one wants pain but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain"
- TheLenore
- Staff
- wesleyearl123
- Architect
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
@Lenore nope, photoshop. I used it just to spice it up a bit, since some other people are using shaders and thought i could use a cover aswell
Owner of McTidgeys
- Zapperzz99
- Engineer
- CPU: AMD FX-8320
- RAM: Vengeance 8gb
- Motherboard: MSI 970A-G46
- GPU: GTX 760 Windforce
- Display: Asus 21.5 & Asus 24"
- Location: Las Vegas
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
I've been here several times ingame and each time it looks better and better! Congrats on finishing up the island and making it your own
Your use of detail is very inspiring and your town is truly unique. McTidgeys FTW! GL

- blackeyeddog
- Master Crafter
- Location: Tauranga New Zealand
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
Since a member of staff hasn't answered This I'll casually chuck in my opinion which should be still valid knowing me
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Uniqueness: 8
Beauty: 7
Execution: 7
Scale: 8
This gives you a total of 30. Enough for architect but not for city planner.
It's cute, the island shape is very cool but in parts it's fairly empty. It could be more full. That's what I find this build is lacking, it's missing that woah factor, something to top it all off. I suggest looking at other successful city planner apps and see how well executed and huge they are.
Your very capable and this is not an official rank answer since I am not a member of staff, do just hold tight someone will mark this

Uniqueness: 8
Beauty: 7
Execution: 7
Scale: 8
This gives you a total of 30. Enough for architect but not for city planner.
It's cute, the island shape is very cool but in parts it's fairly empty. It could be more full. That's what I find this build is lacking, it's missing that woah factor, something to top it all off. I suggest looking at other successful city planner apps and see how well executed and huge they are.
Your very capable and this is not an official rank answer since I am not a member of staff, do just hold tight someone will mark this

- wesleyearl123
- Architect
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
Thanks for the rating Sam, I'll try to work on the things you suggested 

Owner of McTidgeys
- wannsa
- Legendary Crafter
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Re: Wes' City Planner App? I
I'll do a rating too for ya. I agree alot with Bammy, you need a bit more in places. I've been through your place looking around. of course I love each one of the chickens and or chickenesq places. I like the little touches like the signs in the cave. And I really enjoy seeing you use the air space and the water inside town. However, it's just not enough for me. Maybe some bridges and expanding out to the other nearby islands would help you out with some scale issues. I do love it for sure and can't wait for it to be the city where all the chickens go!
Uniqueness: 8
Beauty: 8
Execution: 7
Scale: 7
Uniqueness: 8
Beauty: 8
Execution: 7
Scale: 7

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