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I'm applying for: Architect

Project Name: Ocenas

How do we get there?: /warp Ocenas

Brief Description: Ocenas is a small port town two islands. Ocenas is driven on tourism.

Screenshots: (Optional, don't over-do it, no editing.)

Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: In the Government tunnel at the end to the far right, dig down and you see there "secret" project.

Tomisafish said he was going to rate this, so everyone don't bother.

I already rated this yesterday and upgraded you to Apprentice.

As per your thread here: http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=653

Pri wrote:I already rated this yesterday and upgraded you to Apprentice.

As per your thread here: http://www.mxpulse.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=653

I was already aprentice ._. And that was to see what I would get with my project incomplete.

Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique
i would give it a 4, i don't see many town-like areas built over water.

Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
2, all i see is wood and stone, there is no vary in the blocks you chose

Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
3, as much as it is well thought out, the rooms and buildings are barren and empty, improve on your decor and it will raise it drastically.

Scale: The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
6, the way i see it is relatively large for its size, even if it is just a dock.

This gives you 12 points, not enough for architect im afraid
But if you improve on things like interior and exterior decoration it will help your grade alot.
Good luck in the future Jblaze, i see improvement in yah!

Just a word of advice Jblaze, I dont think its very smart to keep applying with unfinished work as a test to see if you would get the rank. I'm quite sure having more and more topics that were put down because of the whole "test and evaluate" thing wont get you anywhere, it'll just waste your time. This project has potential, so keep it going. When I went to Ocenas, the only thing I honestly saw were walkways all over the place. What I suggest you can do is add more houses or buildings to Ocenas, at least 25+ buildings with the size of your project. Try using more than 2 materials in your build, regarding the stone bricks and wood you used everywhere. If you feel stuck on how to make your buildings, find some inspirations; go around other cities that were successful and take notes from them. If you ever need help or your stuck somewhere, notify me, Ill stop by to help. And by the way, your next app should be your REAL application, no shortcuts, no testing and evaluating, the real deal. Good luck bro.

*Looks at Db*

Since when can architects rate applications.

Im a moderator :/

Not when you posted it. c:

alexcarlson wrote:Not when you posted it. c:

He was a Moderator when he posted it, you were just too blind to see!