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Bartman8 Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:00 pm
by Bartman
I'm applying for: Apprentice

Project Name: HMS Ranger

How do we get there?: /warp Bronyville

Brief Description: A 81 gun ship of the line i made.

Screenshots: (Optional, don't over-do it, no editing.)

Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Dont think so :)

Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:05 pm
by alexcarlson
I would rate it but I'm watching a movie now.

Wish yer' best luck. :)

Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:50 pm
by Dumskalle123
Oh god, I haven't rated anything in years.
Here goes,

Scale: 4 - Not that big, I'd suggest making a fleet with different kinds of ships.

Uniqueness: 3 - We have many ships on our server, if you make it a fleet though; then it'll be a lot more unique. :P

Beauty: 5 - The yellow & black color scheme does not fit the ship, at all. Other than that, it's pretty good.

Execution: 4 - The rooms are too similar, and some of them are kinda empty, if you fix this though, the Execution score would be way higher.

4+3+5+4 = 16, congratulations, you've made Apprentice!

Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 9:15 pm
by Bartman
Dumskalle123 wrote:Oh god, I haven't rated anything in years.
Here goes,

Scale: 4 - Not that big, I'd suggest making a fleet with different kinds of ships.

Uniqueness: 3 - We have many ships on our server, if you make it a fleet though; then it'll be a lot more unique. :P

Beauty: 5 - The yellow & black color scheme does not fit the ship, at all. Other than that, it's pretty good.

Execution: 4 - The rooms are too similar, and some of them are kinda empty, if you fix this though, the Execution score would be way higher.

4+3+5+4 = 16, congratulations, you've made Apprentice!
Thank you Dumskalle :)

Well, first the hull was just tree blocks and i thought it was pretty bad with just tree blocks all over the ship, so i tried to re-design it. But i guess it didnt work :/