I'm applying for: Apprentice
Project Name: HMS Ranger
How do we get there?: /warp Bronyville
Brief Description: A 81 gun ship of the line i made.
Screenshots: (Optional, don't over-do it, no editing.)
Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Dont think so
Bartman8 Apprentice Application
- Bartman
- Architect
- Location: Sundsvall, Sweden
- alexcarlson
- Member
- Contact:
- GPU: NVIDIA GeForce GTX 660
- Display: BenQ GL2450 (Digital)
- Location: Sweden
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Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application
I would rate it but I'm watching a movie now.
Wish yer' best luck.
Wish yer' best luck.
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"I shall stay on this server forever so I get new friends and becomes one in the staff" - Alex
"It's true the servers are back online." - Pri
- Dumskalle123
- Supporter
- CPU: AMD Phenom II X4 965 BE (crap)
- RAM: Corsair Vengeance 8GB
- Motherboard: ASUS M4A87TD/USB3 (crap)
- GPU: ASUS DirectCU II GTX 580
- Display: 2x ASUS VH238H
- Cooling: Air
- Location: Sweden
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Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application
Oh god, I haven't rated anything in years.
Here goes,
Scale: 4 - Not that big, I'd suggest making a fleet with different kinds of ships.
Uniqueness: 3 - We have many ships on our server, if you make it a fleet though; then it'll be a lot more unique.
Beauty: 5 - The yellow & black color scheme does not fit the ship, at all. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Execution: 4 - The rooms are too similar, and some of them are kinda empty, if you fix this though, the Execution score would be way higher.
4+3+5+4 = 16, congratulations, you've made Apprentice!
Here goes,
Scale: 4 - Not that big, I'd suggest making a fleet with different kinds of ships.
Uniqueness: 3 - We have many ships on our server, if you make it a fleet though; then it'll be a lot more unique.
Beauty: 5 - The yellow & black color scheme does not fit the ship, at all. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Execution: 4 - The rooms are too similar, and some of them are kinda empty, if you fix this though, the Execution score would be way higher.
4+3+5+4 = 16, congratulations, you've made Apprentice!
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- Bartman
- Architect
- Location: Sundsvall, Sweden
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Well, first the hull was just tree blocks and i thought it was pretty bad with just tree blocks all over the ship, so i tried to re-design it. But i guess it didnt work :/
Re: Bartman8 Apprentice Application
Thank you DumskalleDumskalle123 wrote:Oh god, I haven't rated anything in years.
Here goes,
Scale: 4 - Not that big, I'd suggest making a fleet with different kinds of ships.
Uniqueness: 3 - We have many ships on our server, if you make it a fleet though; then it'll be a lot more unique.
Beauty: 5 - The yellow & black color scheme does not fit the ship, at all. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Execution: 4 - The rooms are too similar, and some of them are kinda empty, if you fix this though, the Execution score would be way higher.
4+3+5+4 = 16, congratulations, you've made Apprentice!
Well, first the hull was just tree blocks and i thought it was pretty bad with just tree blocks all over the ship, so i tried to re-design it. But i guess it didnt work :/
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