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KyyLmao apprentice application

Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2017 5:30 pm
by Kyylmao
The Rank I'm applying for is: Apprentice (I'd take anything higher on the 0.01% chance I meet the expectations xD)
My Game Name is: KyyLmao
My Project is called: RiverCliff
To get to my project: /town spawn rivercliff
A brief description of my project: A fantasy medieval town with different districts such as (for now, and even these arent finished) a mining district and a middle class district . Very much still a WIP, with a lot of builds yet to come. The smaller houses arent made by myself, they belong to the lovely Mioyn. The large builds are my own
Three mandatory screenshots:

https://imgur.com/qUoRrbP
https://imgur.com/3IhaWdl
https://imgur.com/gFTLpsQ

Re: KyyLmao apprentice application

Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2017 6:12 pm
by killer
Hi Kyylmao
Let's get you a ruling, yeah?
Uniqueness: 4, I think you've got a really good thing going with the town spawn, and the mine, but I think you could use some variation with the rest of the smaller buildings
Beauty: 4, In future additions to your town, I would use some additional materials, as the wood and stone only go so far, what you have looks great, but adding some contrasting blocks could really up your beauty score a lot!
Execution: 5
Scale: 4, The scale of the mine is great, but it also dwarfs the houses in the town.

Overall, I think this is a lovely start to your town, and I can't wait to see how you expand it. I love the fantasy feel, and how it reminds me of some other rpg games :)

Total score: 17 Apprentice Rank Earned