Orange's Architect

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Orange's Architect

Sun Jan 31, 2016 11:54 pm

Rank I'm applying for: Architect
In game Name: OrangePhantom3
Project Name: Lovely Little Town
How to get to the build: Go to creative, warp flat and go to cords: -1335.297/32/60.633

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Description of my Build: A town that was once in clouds fell to earth the clouds under them disappearing until a brave baby dragon saved them they give thanks everyday and hope one day the baby dragon will return so they may give him the gifts he rightfully deserves, Many buildings are older then most.

Note: All buildings have interior design so don't be afraid to look in them or to see what cool things you can find!
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Re: Orange's Architect

Mon Feb 01, 2016 2:07 am

I think this might actually get Architect, however that depends, because it's in creative
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Re: Orange's Architect

Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:37 am

Uniqueness - 4
Beauty - 4
Execution - 6
Scale - 5

Uniqueness, as you might find it ridiculously low, is just fair as between 4 and 5. Most of the buildings, even combining into one, is almost seen as common in Creative. Beauty, 4 because lack of colorful materials and doesn't full use of Creative building blocks. While it is decently done, it is medium size, just as right.

Total score is 19 out of 40 - I like to see you unleash your inner creativity, much room to improve on.
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Re: Orange's Architect

Mon Feb 01, 2016 3:47 am

This sadly just doesn't cut it. Its All flat with no terrain. The buildings are boxy needing more time spent on them with detail added to most of the Builds. This is also around half the size u need to get it to the standard it has to be.

Look I have seen many attempts from you at getting Architect. But the reality is. Is that you need to think what you want to do and spend a long time building it. Not these quick jobs because all this will do is keep you at the Apprentice level your at already. I saw this build yesterday and it was only half of whats here. I suggest Less speed and more thought and detail into what you are building. because if you do that you will hit architect.

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Re: Orange's Architect

Mon Feb 01, 2016 2:36 pm

I agree with Blackie, you could add some maybe mountains in the background, however what I personally use is other people's builds,
Now I'm not saying to copy it, but just take an idea and create in a your head. For instance, I think you could add some things like:
Gravel+Stone+StoneBrick+CobbleStone Brick Road (I'd say make it kind of wiggly, maybe the size of your road) and maybe since it's a
Medieval (I know it's not fully medieval I don't want you to think that I didn't read your description) you could maybe go read on some realistic Medieval Times, however I won't really give you more information, you'll have to do that :)
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