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Rox_1988 Architect Application

Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2015 11:46 am
by Rox1988
The Rank I'm applying for is: architect
My Game Name is: Rox_1988
My Project is called: Skyscraper
To get to my project: -19767 63 3325 or /town spawn atlantis
A brief description of my project: I originally wanted a build to hide an ugly iron farm... this is what I came up with. I have spent a lot of time on this build, doing it all myself.
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Re: Rox_1988 Architect Application

Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:03 am
by MentosBoost
I have now seen it in game, so I will rate it :)
I think this build is great, however I do not believe it's architect worthy - yet. An explanation will be given with the points.

Uniqueness: 6 - There are quite a few skyscrapers on the server already.
Beauty: 7 - although it's lovely on the outside and when you enter the building, I can't help but notice that it seems unfinished and empty on the second floor and outside around the skyscraper. Here I would suggest making more floors inside and work with the landscaping outside.
Execution: 6 - It needs to be finished, though it has great details so keep it up.
Scale: 8 - Good scale for architect

In total: 27, which only is enough for apprentice. You'll need 30 for architect and since you're already apprentice there won't be a rank-change. You're only 3 points away from architect and I do believe it has the potential for it. :)

Re: Rox_1988 Architect Application

Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2015 11:22 am
by Rox1988
thank you for the feedback, it is much appreciated x