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Rank that I am applying for: Architect
Game Name: Rambo_Nol
What my project is called: The Quadradome
To get to my project: Go to the Creative server, type /warp flat2, and go to coordinates:
X=-25135 Y=70 Z=3880 (right near flat2 warp)
A Description of my project: Well it started off as a space arena, then I decided I liked the idea of a Biodome, so I wanted to change it up a little bit and add 4 strange and unique biomes (for the most part). A couple of them I tried to make look like pre-existing biome with a little difference. The lights and support systems are powered by Hydropower within the dome. The entrances have an invisible force field to control and stabilize the air, heat, etc. The four beacons help regulate each different biomes' conditions. There are lava powered thrusters to control the direction and area of the dome as it floats throughout space. The beacons are always meant to point towards the home planet, Earth, so if it goes out the humans may be alerted to a disruption of the system. It's ultimate goal is to test artificial biomes of other planets to find new ways to live on planets that normally seem unable to live on. And yes, it is meant not to be circle shaped on purpose.

Uniqueness: 7 , it is indeed a unique build, the concept of biodome not so much unique.
Beauty: 4 , I personally didn't find it visually appealing on the exterior.
Execution: 5 , you had an idea and created it.
Scale: 3 , no that large of a build.
Final total: 19/30, not enough for architect.

While it may be unique, it somewhat lacks in the other 3 criteria. I like that you show ambition in building though, make sure to keep it up.

I also want to bring up something. It seems as though you have been quite, how do you say, "obsessed" with ranking up, just from the interest you have shown recently. You just joined the creative server within the last 24 hours and already have thrown out a project. I think you should put more time into your builds. Don't just build to rank up, build because you enjoy it. You have a long way to go, and I think apprentice is a satisfactory rank for you at this moment. Keep up the work!

What can I say, I am stubborn and persistent.

That's a good thing. You'll get it with that mind set

imo, this is kinda what i think based on other ppls architect application.
Uniqueness: 8
Only seen one of these before.
Beauty: 4
Tbh, its ugly
Execution: 6
Fairly done well needs work
Scale: 5
Not big but not small.
so thats 23/30 needed
imo keep working and you will get it