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Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 9:27 pm
by ProfKibbles
The Rank I'm applying for is: Apprentice
My Game Name is: Prof_Kibbles
My Project is called: Biodome: Now with 100% less Pauly Shore!
To get to my project: Ask me for a TP.
A brief description of my project: A flying Biodome capable of sustaining life. Theoretically, at least.
Three mandatory screenshots:
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Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:03 pm
by Lynxious
1. Uniqueness - How unique is your creation?
6 - I personally havn't seen any flying biodomes, pretty cool idea.

2. Beauty - How beautiful is your creation? Does it have diverse style of building?
3 - the top seems chopped off, and the lights and fountain don't really seem to fit. I'd also try to incorporate more blocks to give it some more eye appeal.

3. Execution - Each part of the building must be proportioned.
3 - I just don't feel like the top and bottom fit right, and it looks a tad clunky.

4. Scale - How large space does your creation took?
2 - this is tiny. perhaps make several of these?

6+3+3+2=14 Just shy of apprenticeship. Make a few modifications, make it a bit bigger and I'm sure you can get apprentice. The idea is good, just need more work put into it!

Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 3:31 pm
by Psico45
How come is it that I have never seen this guy in game? Nor the structure for that matter

Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 7:00 pm
by IceDevice
May I note this was back in Tekkit and also that Lynx has been gone for quite a bit?
Look at the date it was posted, as well.

Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:34 pm
by Psico45
Lol back at tekkit, no wonder I had never seen this XD Thanks Ice

Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:07 am
by Zapperzz99
Why is this showing up at the top of the rank application forum if this is so old lynx was staf and this was from tekkit?

Re: Apprentice Application

Posted: Sat Jun 08, 2013 12:02 pm
by Psico45
Because yesterday i was bored enough to start going through posts and got carried away. I'll lock this topic to avoid unnecessary necro.