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I'm applying for: Apprentice

In-Game name: Jayman0101

Project Name: Small home in the Woods

How do we get there?: Got to the coordinates X: -7342 Z: -1586. It's not far from spawn, so It shouldn't be to hard to find.

Brief Description: I built this house to apply for apprentice. It has a nice garden/park and walkway, and the house is small, yet livable.

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Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Nope. Hope you like it :]

Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique
6 - Houses are a staple on our server, of course, but nothing beats one that's well-integrated with the landscape.

Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
1 = Ugly, 10 = Really really beautiful
10 - I love the style. One of the nicest-made constructs I've seen for apprentice-level apps. I dunno about others, but I personally would give it a 10 for its appearance.

Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
1 = Built by Refugees, 10 = Built by Master Craftsmen
6 - It is well-made, but the ceilings could be a bit higher. I love the exterior, though. The waterworks are really well-executed.

Scale: The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
1 = Golf-Ball Size Settlement, 10 = Entire City
5 - The house isn't big, but I feel it's important for one to know how to build with one's surroundings, and you've done a good job utilizing outdoor space with it.

That gets you 27 points, really close to Architect, but it definitely gets you your Apprentice rank.

A lot of the bonus points come from your exterior, which I particularly like. Now, I want you to develop that style some more in your builds and go for Architect with the Apprentice tools; perhaps build a small town in this style and satisfy that scale factor. Anyways, good job, and congratulations!

Obviously it isnt my decision but I would probably give it a 6 on beauty and a 3 on scale.
Dont take it personally Im just saying.

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