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I'm applying for: Architect

In-Game Name: I dunno its like applefire9 or somethin

Project Name: Olympics

How do we get there?: /warp olympics

Brief Description: Its the olympics! Hooray! Also Kudos to grim for helping me with the spleef arena.

Screenshots: (Optional, don't over-do it, no editing.)

Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: Not really.

Ok i took a look at it.

Uniqueness: We don't have an olympic stadium on the server, its first of its kind. BUT, i've seen olympic stadiums before on other servers and you do have some pre-made games (archery, spleef) But, i do love the track idea. You get an 8 out of 10

Beauty: I don't understand the purpose of the dome, i find they are kind of ugly/eye sore. Inside the stadium however its nice and organized. I like the trees, the walls, everything. The entrance is kinda of ugly, you over did it on the glow stone. You get a 6 out of 10

Execution: I would have like if there were a lot more games- there aren't just six events in the olympics. Look online, i know BlueXephos did a really cool minecraft olympics with awesome events. Also i wish you made the awards ceremony area more centered/feature and more grand, it felt kinda lame. There was a lot of open space in between the actual stadium and the dome. Make the pools bigger, and make the track bigger! Make it eligible so more people can compete at once. Most importantly-there is no stadium seating!!! You get a 4 out of 10.

Scale: Its fairly large, but if you add the things i said above you get a 10 out of 10. You get a 7 out of 10.

Summary: You scored a 25, which is not enough for Architect. However, if you fix the things i said in Execution category, which are fairly simply fixes, you could defiantly get that rank. I hope to see you do these because i love the idea! I would love for people on the server to get together and compete in these games. Hope to see this again in the future!

Better luck next time I guess.
Just want to point out one last thing, the dome is only there because I accidentally made the stadium in a winter biome, so the pools kept freezing. So I Hall to make a dome over it so they stopped freezing.

Fix the things in execution like the stadium seating and you'll get Architect.

Im not gonna work on the stadium again.

but you're so close, I believe in you.

YOU CAN DO IT JESSE!