I'm applying for: Architect
Project Name: Shrines
How do we get there?: Creative Server; /warp shrines
Brief Description: Three shrines according to the MineCraft world: Nether, Creeper, Diamond (the End wasn't implemented until after I was building it
Screenshots: (Optional, don't over-do it, no editing.)
Anything we might miss when we see it in game?: The Diamond Shrine has all ores in it and has a mineshaft/ravine type thing. All shrines have a unique entrance and poetic form of what they are (according to my perspective).
bmjerk's Application for Architect
- bmjerk
- Apprentice
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bmjerk's Application for Architect
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- Diamond Shrine is a secret. :D You have to break the two blocks in the middle to open.
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- Nether Shrine
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- Creeper Shrine
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- Top view of the Spawn part. Yin Yang
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- Location: San Francisco, CA
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Re: bmjerk's Application for Architect
Uniqueness on our server: Does it look like something already built?
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique
Rating: 7 - It's def. something that I have yet to have seen on the rendition of the server, what with the shrine to each area.
Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
1 = Ugly, 10 = Really really beautiful
Rating: 5 - I wouldn't call it ugly, but I wouldn't call it beautiful. There is a lot of space to do something, I am just not that sure what.
Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
1 = Built by Refugees, 10 = Built by Master Craftsmen
Rating: 6 - It's getting there. I like the Yin & Yang. However, the lack of a roof of somesort in the structure is a little bothersome. I like that there are themed areas, however, they are rather small. It would be neat to have representations of each item that you are talking about in the areas. Like a zoo for the creeper area, and block samples for the other two. I know that "The End" wasn't incorporated when you first started building this, but there's no reason it couldn't be now.
Scale:The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
1 = Golf-Ball Size Settlement, 10 = Entire City
Rating: 7 - It's def. huge, though, not like a large city (Such as some on the survival server). Again, I would look at expanding your areas that you have already started to flesh out.
This adds up to: 25, a sum of which, unfortunately, is not enough for Architect,
although it is enough for Apprentice, but since you already have Apprentice, this does not gain you anything. I'm sorry.
1 = Not unique, 10 = Very very unique
Rating: 7 - It's def. something that I have yet to have seen on the rendition of the server, what with the shrine to each area.
Beauty: Does it look nice to look at?
1 = Ugly, 10 = Really really beautiful
Rating: 5 - I wouldn't call it ugly, but I wouldn't call it beautiful. There is a lot of space to do something, I am just not that sure what.
Execution: Is it well made, are corridors and rooms built to the correct sizing?
1 = Built by Refugees, 10 = Built by Master Craftsmen
Rating: 6 - It's getting there. I like the Yin & Yang. However, the lack of a roof of somesort in the structure is a little bothersome. I like that there are themed areas, however, they are rather small. It would be neat to have representations of each item that you are talking about in the areas. Like a zoo for the creeper area, and block samples for the other two. I know that "The End" wasn't incorporated when you first started building this, but there's no reason it couldn't be now.
Scale:The larger and more grand the build is the higher it scores
1 = Golf-Ball Size Settlement, 10 = Entire City
Rating: 7 - It's def. huge, though, not like a large city (Such as some on the survival server). Again, I would look at expanding your areas that you have already started to flesh out.
This adds up to: 25, a sum of which, unfortunately, is not enough for Architect,
although it is enough for Apprentice, but since you already have Apprentice, this does not gain you anything. I'm sorry.
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