Mnbass's Architect Application

[mnbass]

The Rank I'm applying for is: Architect
My Game Name is: Mnbass
My Project is called: Thieves Lair
To get to my project: 540x, 17603z (You can go to Legacy town and its pretty close)
A brief description of my project: It's a little ravine town made for the thieves of Legacy. Filled with Multiple Houses, Armory, Bar, Firing Range, Storage (with a secret in the closet), Dining Hall. Raging rapids below
Three mandatory screenshots:

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[Pri]

I've looked at the screenshots and visited the build in-game I'm ready to give a rating.

Uniqueness: 10/10 - It's very unique, I've personally never seen a town carved into a ravine.
Beauty: 4/10 - Not very appealing visually
Execution: 3/10 - The walkways are not great, the buildings lack detail
Scale: 4/10 - Most of the scale is just from the size of the ravine which already existed. You've not put that many blocks inside.


Total: 21 / 40 - You need 30/40 to get Architect. This is however enough for Apprentice. My advice would be to either go back and remake almost this entire build, making much larger homes inside the walls with multiple rooms and lots of detail (furnishings, paintings etc) or start over on another build entirely.

I hope this didn't come across too harshly, it's never my intent to be overly critical but I do want to be truthful and I don't think this build has had a lot of effort put into it, I think you could do a lot better.