Wesleyearl Arch Application #3....

[wesleyearl123]

-The Rank I am applying for is: Architect
-My IGN: wesleyearl
-My Project is called: Denvardo City (Atleast for now, I might change it.)
-To get to my project: Teleport In-Game, or Coords: XYZ are 10201, 69 (huehue), -7419.
-A brief description for this project: Denvardo City takes place in the 1980's, having basic oldy time things such as a blacksmith shop, a barn, a fishing shelter, a well, a McTidgey restaurant! , and more. It is located on a small island where the great Cave Denvardo exist. McTidgey restaurant (I should stop with that) is a great place to dine with your family, having great dishes such as lots of chicken.
-Screenshot links:
Aerial View of Island: http://imgur.com/D3VNMJD (The circle is meant to be a dock.)
-Honorable Pictures
Daloria & Wannsa Titanic Moment: http://imgur.com/HCiCB2Y
Daigle Shrine: http://imgur.com/j7yRspC
Endangered Tidges: http://imgur.com/YQNho2C
Conclusion - This island has more to (not guaranteed) come, as I might let go of it. Pros and Cons are accepted in this application (Mods & Admins: If I were to bother you enough, I would request a score on how well the rating format is). There are Easter Eggs hidden around the island, some inside buildings, some camouflaged. Possibly in my next application, there will be more Staff moments and fun things you might take a little giggle out of. Also.... Happy Halloween!

[Daloria]

Uniqueness: 7
Beauty: 8
Execution: 7
Scale: 6

Total = 28 not enough for Architect.

Ok fellow chicken lover, what you have on this island is great. The builds themselves are brilliant, well thought out, good interiors but they are dotted on this island with nothing connecting them and just bare landscape all around, your scale/execution score will go up if you work on that. Things like trees/bushes, pathways, roads, ponds, rivers etc. All of those things are fillers that can bring all the buildings together rather than have them isolated and placed all over the island like they are not relevant to each other. Plus you'll fill up a lot of empty space with those too.

Overall a very good job, keep at it. I will be using McTidgeys as my new restaurant of choice.

You can resubmit in 7 days.

[wesleyearl123]

;D To me, 28/30 has got to be the best I've gotten so far, thanks to you, and hope you have a great time in McTidgey too! Thank you for your advice Dal, I might add in another building to get bullet straight on Architect!